To short and unfinished A nice short storyI can t help but like Nancy s stories and this one was very different from the usual supernatural books she s written I would like to see this as a Series It May Already Be One And It may already be one and ust don t know There were some errors but I don t know if they are typos or ust missed in the proofreadingI do see a lot of that in e books Weird mermaid love scene eeeeekkkkkAnd weird description of merfolk double eeeeekkkkkkkBeside the hero rape the heroine in attempt to change her to merfolk like him So she can save his people SAY WHAAT UghAlso the story too short But the weirdest thing is I uite enjoy this story What s wrong with me rubbed head Terrible Terrible TerribleThe whole story is stupid because the team who took Nia in the first place could have gotten Sophie too if they d listened to what Niawas saying instead of putting her to sleep Everything that followed was because of that mistakeThe hero has been celibate for a hundred years closing himself off to love and family after his heart was broken by a human woman Yet he falls in love with Nia in the course of a day ReallyThe heroine falls in love with a guy who kidnapped her then basically drugs and rapes her She doesn t know anything about him so her love is based on nothingThe sex. Nia Diakos has an ordinary life running her restaurant taking care of her little sister Suddenly her restaurant is attacked her little sister kidnapped and Nia is catapulted into a colossal war between the forces of good and evil among an ancient race of magicians kno.
read ´ PDF, DOC, TXT or eBook ´ Nancy HolderS they come from a family of Keepers Suddenly her restaurant is attacked and her sister is kidnapped while she is rescued by another group She is taken to their leader Eric who is captivated by this human woman when he knows he cannot be leader Eric who is captivated by this human woman when he knows he cannot be He is *A Merman Chieftain Harboring *merman chieftain harboring of grief Nia is catapulted into a fight between good and evil and both groups are searching for the ancient artifact her family had lost during WWII And only she or her sister can touch it This story felt rushed with only the briefest of background information given Also because it is a race against time as to who will get to the object first Nia is forced into a change that she is not given a choice about which will change her life forever It has it s HEA but the story was too rushed for me to really enjoy It was also hard to really get to know the characters enough to really care about the outcome I don t see myself picking up any books in this series though I am glad to have tried it out I was so eager to read this story and it began pretty goodtowards the end was I don t know weirdthe love scene are you kidding me I did not like it one bit I felt abused something like thatI saw so much potential in this story I would LOVE to read something else about merfolks but in a different way. Grief Despite the fierce attraction between them Erik is guarded and cold But as the two unite to defeat the evil enemy Nia must be transformed into a mermaid in order to accomplish her mission and the only way to do that is to become Erik's lover and conceive his chi. ,
Rape scene was very off puttingThe
OF AROUSED MALE GENITALIA ABOVE Aaroused male genitalia above a is disturbing not arousingGunnar is the Guardian s second in command He wants to be the Guardian himself And yet he is so indiscreet that he tell s Erik s business to a complete strangerThen there s the end of the story I ve never found it to be romantic when the hero allows the heroine or vice versa to go on believing that he doesn t feel the same way that she does ust to do a big dramatic reveal I Timo l'Aventurier tome 1 just think it s cruel In this case it s even so since he can actually read her thoughts and knows how miserable she is Oh My Word Stockholm syndrome anyone How can the hero kidnap rape and impregnate the heroine then she falls in love with him and they l In an otherwise interesting story the rape scene between the hero and heroine in the conclusion of the story left a bitter taste in my mouth That s one situation I can t stand in romances especially when it is triumphed by everyone else and the heroine is supposed to have fallen in love with the hero at this point Nice world building and an interesting story up until that point This story has an interesting premise Nia Diakos hasust received a letter from an unknown Aunt from Greece telling her that she and her sister might be in danger Wn as The Gifted And that's only the beginningRacing to retrieve the powerfully magical Jar of Naxos from the depths of the North Sea before the evil opposition finds it Nia is paired with Erik a merman chieftan whose icy demeanor reflects a century of bitterness and.